Added a solid 3 seconds and has a pretty ending. What do you guys think I should add or do to make this trick a bit more cooler?
Previous video
bump
try to keep the yoyo moving
I really like the ‘trick construction pt2’ vid. I dont really have any suggestions.
Yea i like the second one better and i dont really think you need to do anything more to it. Its very flowy and that ending is just straight up cool! 
My one problem with it is it’s slightly generic.
Which part is generic exactly?
The first half.
I liked the second video better. Beyond that I have no suggestions because what you are doing now is better than I am doing. Just keep up the good work.
Nice stuff!
Couple things I thought to point out.
The first over hook whip I feel isn’t really needed. It feels somehow too “additional” to the rest of the trick like it doesn’t fit entirely. Perhaps a different sort of whip mount or transition would work better.
At 6-7 ish seconds, the drop to trapeze feels a bit unsmooth or possibly not planned to me.
In terms of being “generic” I would say certain parts are, others are quite original. Anything involving a rolling 1.5 tends to be seen as generic to many people unless its very different. I like that last whip into stop and go gt, that is the element I would hold onto very much so as you find yourself tweaking the combo here and there.
Overall quite good and not choppy at all. I like! 