my day off "a yoyo video"


#1


comments are appreciated


#2

Nice! Although, I must say the second half of the video was better than the first. Better tricks, went faster, smoother, overall, you are good!


#3

thanks


#4

Eh, I felt in between.

The tricks were fantastic, but that’s not the most important thing. I only completed the video to give constructive criticism. Make sure the lighting is good for most of your clips. A lot of times, I couldn’t see the string. Also, experiment with different angles to keep viewer interest. You seem to be too far from the camera a lot. Finally, Try to smoothen out some tricks, and you’ll be set! :wink:


#5

thanks