i PGM [plactic grind machine] is a great yoyo cause it has a light weight body and a long sleeper for a low price but if u want to get a p gm you might as well get a dark magic yoyo because its 10 time better and only $10 more ;D
Just some suggestions, I would go More in depth, and explain more, and go through your mitsakes 
Also If you are going to Compare yoyo’s, which is usually a good idea, Try explaining why The Dark Magic is better, It is not my place To tell you how to write posts, So take this as Advice for next time 
Any hoo… nice review I also enjoy the PGM.