i PGM [plactic grind machine] is a great yoyo cause it has a light weight body and a long sleeper for a low price but if u want to get a p gm you might as well get a dark magic yoyo because its 10 time better and only $10 more ;D

Just some suggestions, I would go More in depth, and explain more, and go through your mitsakes :stuck_out_tongue:
Also If you are going to Compare yoyo’s, which is usually a good idea, Try explaining why The Dark Magic is better, It is not my place To tell you how to write posts, So take this as Advice for next time :slight_smile:

Any hoo… nice review I also enjoy the PGM.