my two competition routines

heres my north east regionals one

and heres my rhode island state one. the recorder didnt get all of it

can you guys help me and tell me what i can improve on

You should try moving around more in your freestyles rather than standing in one place other than that great job

I thought that didnt matter so much in prelims?

Thanks ill use that in my next freestyle

Woah, hey David!
Forgot you were on here. I hung out with you at NER and RI states, what’s up?

Sup charlie how r u doing