horizontal suicide

my first horizontal suicide tell me what you guys think or how i can improve it!

Pretty tight. I do seem to think that it is not quite a drastic enough angel though. However, this is coming from someone with NO horizontal experience.

I agree, its very difficult full horizontal. I landed one and nearly hit my yoyo on the concrete

lol i been trying to go more horizontal i think in a few months or so it will be decent x)