listen, my friend started out yoyoing after me and my other friend darkadlermagic3 recommended the yoyofactory one for him.
it would make his day when he comes back from camp and sees 200+ views. im asking for all you yoyoers to watch this video in its entirety and possibly give him some helpful criticism by commenting (especially coming from professional yoyoers). also try not to cry from his fails! if you are a professional or forum expert or moderator or any position of significance, please say so so hes knows hes getting advice from the pros!
i added this longer video just for an extra view of his skill level