I didn’t watch the whole tutorial, but I watched the trick, and do have a suggestion.
First, the move at 10 sec could be improved. Landing the yoyo on a string, then undoing it is rarely a good way to change momentum. It looked like the trick ginded to a halt and you started another one. There were a few other places were the momentum changes were lack luster and I think this kind of killed the flow of the trick. Other than that it was pretty good.
the trick has a nice flow great job dude your getting better
Thanks, that sort of critisizm is exactly what im after!