So just tell me what you think.Completely open to constructive criticism.
Prelims:
http://youtu.be/cHEeWUPNDb8
Finals:
http://youtu.be/a9pAZouBBgo
I was having playback issues today with the finals but that might just be me.
I saw you at the contest, you did really good!
Wish, your really good. If I had to say something that you have to improve on, is probably be more like enthusiastic or something, it do more dangerous tricks 
but yours are already awesome!
You your self sir great as well
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What did you mean by “wish”
Oh, lol meant woah!
You did good and you have a fantastic taste in music !!
thank you it means a lot.but like I said what could I do to have stronger,better freestyles that score higher?
Its hard to say, your already really good! What I try to do is put a little bit of everything in my performances (if I ever do perform XD), I mean do some horizontal, some whips, slacks, you already have gt’s,also some hops, etc. It looks a bit nicer to do stuff like that.
Horizontal will score much higher than “normal” tricks, due to the difficulty of playing horizontal.
So yeah.
Horizontal.
well I just came up with a new horizontal finger grind neck thing that should be a good banger.
I thought you did really well man. The finals vid didn’t work so I am judging off the prelims vid. Definitely enjoying your style, I think if you incorporated some more slack tricks it would look really good with everything else you do!
Nice job!
Yeah nice job Big Boy! 
The finals video was working today so i’d watch that one if you haven’t,had some more original tricks.
Wow! That was a really great freestyle! Your style is really cool and flowy.
I’ve been hearing That a lot. Apparently I have a very chill style.
Yes, hearing Thor is important indeed 
You tend to pause between elements. Your movement in between elements are very smooth, but the pauses here and there cause a disturbance.
You have a good natural style, fits your body motions well and doesn’t feel forced.
Ignore what that other person said about horizontal. Unless the horizontal is something truly unique and difficult, its a waste of time. Horizontals are too overdone anyways.
I saw some Alex Berenguel influence in there? If that’s the case, major props to you, one of my fave players.
Good stuff, I see much future in you.
Haru
I fixed it calm down
Thank you,it really means a lot coming from someone as good as yourself.I have to ask,where do you see the Berenguel influence? I can kinda understand where you get that now looking at it.But could you like tell me the times in which I paused,so I could smooth those tricks out.It may have been because of nerves.