Hope you like…
I stink…don’t I?
NO! You don’t stink. You throw better than I do and this is a good first effort. Keep working.
Not a bad first effort. I would suggest, however, to smooth out, speed up, and perfect your tricks.
For a first video that was not bad at all. And you’re better than 99% of the world’s population when it comes to yoyoing, so don’t let that bring you down too much. One piece of advice I can give you is that if you do make new videos, which I would love to see because I want to see how you’ve progressed, don’t overdo the slo-mo. Its cool to highlight a certain element or trick, but after a while it can get really drawn out
Thanks. I’ll keep that in mind.