How did i do on my first tutorial yoyo vid

all in the title, the viedo quality will get better because i just uploaded it

Well there is already a great tutorial for that trick on this site. Maybe you should have done a original trick or a trick there isn’t a tutorial for.

Just my thoughts.

I agree with David, but I’ll continue with my thoughts on the whole thing itself.

Here’s what I see problems with: too quiet, the string was kind of hard to see unless it wasn’t moving, too much talk in the beginning about your yoyo or whatever else, and usually you use the momentum of the yoyo to land into the split bottom.

Other than that it wasn’t too bad. I bet that the next one you make (if you do) will be great.