that was so cool how you fillmed it. what yoyo?
888 with ceramic konkave and m1 for 1a and kickside with dorthy bearing for 5a
I still think the lighting was off in some parts :-
Also, make sure to smoothen out your tricks, they seemed pretty choppy.
Next, make sure the camera catches all of your tricks. In addition, when you switch angles, try to make it flow.
Besides that, good video.