My beginner video:D...i need help for improvements:)

This is my video and i want to know what i’m not doing good in it:D


and this is the second part…i filmed it a few days ago and in the second the string is more visible but i’m doing almost the same thing…now besides the video i just finished to learn the first two parts of “And Whut” and i’m going to improve them ;D

Nice. Good improvement from the first to the second. Next time, try to get more black behind you and get some different spots/angles. Other than that, awesome.

I liked it! my only complainant isn’t even about your yoyoing, but you should edit out you clickibg the remote every time. when I film my brother always has to remind me to let the camera roll for 1-2 seconds so he can edit around it.