werrd irony jp 2k13 3Tricks Please tell me what you think

this most of my newest material used a werrd irony jp 2k13

constructive criticicism wanted

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I like it! Try not to pause for so long. Good stuff bro

that one pause on the second trick was an accident didn’t mean to pause that long
but thanks for the insight

I like trick 1

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Nice job…you are very technical w/your tricks, but you could really improve your entire trick presentation w/a small change…I think. Slow down! Your technic is flawless but your not in a race! Your an artist, so show it dude!! Keep it smooooooth…well done!

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I must be blind. :wink: I didn’t notice any significant pauses, excessive speed, or lack of smoothness! I thought they were smooth tricks indeed!

The only thing I would improve is to avoid too many elements where you simply “mount on a string segment, and then undo it then mount on another string segment, and undo it.” I personally like my tricks to have mostly forward momentum. “Rewinding” part of a trick just doesn’t typically do it for me.

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when doing figure 8’s try not to put your hands so close together, it will make them look a lot cooler.

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Great job man. Keep at it.