Video review For Revolution


Okay review but you went too long talking about size and not enough tIme on it’s play


its not an annoying 10 year old kid with a British accent ;D ;D

Okay, here are some tips:

  1. Plan out your review. Throughout the video it seems like you were just going through aspects of the yo-yo as they came up. It would be better if you knew what to say and when to say it.
  2. Don’t be afraid to use cuts. Stop recording if you find yourself struggling for words. Making cuts also helps when you make a mistake and have to do multiple takes.
  3. I’d stick away from number ratings. Here’s why:


Talk more about the yoyos play, maybe do some tricks.

Did someone hear a slap at 6:55?

Apparently he slapped his niece(her hand?) when she asked him a question.

Why would you slap your niece? She sounded about six!

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