Video review For Revolution

[XxKingDomxX23]

- YouTube

PLEASE COMMENT ;D ;D

[j_lowell9 (laxdude99)]

Okay review but you went too long talking about size and not enough tIme on it’s play

[mista8eight8]

yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

its not an annoying 10 year old kid with a British accent ;D ;D

[catorameus (JayVee)]

Okay, here are some tips:

1. Plan out your review. Throughout the video it seems like you were just going through aspects of the yo-yo as they came up. It would be better if you knew what to say and when to say it.
2. Don’t be afraid to use cuts. Stop recording if you find yourself struggling for words. Making cuts also helps when you make a mistake and have to do multiple takes.
3. I’d stick away from number ratings. Here’s why:

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Rating systems. You might think that a cool, flashy rating system will improve your review and give a precise measuring of the object’s quality, but it will probably just show your own biased opinion. Let the readers make up their own opinion about the object. Your job is not to give the object a rating, your job is to bring out all the facts.

[XxKingDomxX23]

Thanks

[yoyoz1]

Talk more about the yoyos play, maybe do some tricks.

Did someone hear a slap at 6:55?

[catorameus (JayVee)]

@yoyoz1

Did someone hear a slap at 6:55?

Apparently he slapped his niece(her hand?) when she asked him a question.

[duckie]

@JayVee

@yoyoz1

Did someone hear a slap at 6:55?

Apparently he slapped his niece(her hand?) when she asked him a question.

Why would you slap your niece? She sounded about six!

[XxKingDomxX23]

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