Oh so now we’re tag teamin
I should leave my ideas steamin
So my parents will be gleamin
When I step of a stage
Goin into rage
Letiin myself outta this cage
As I’m turning this page
I’m lookin at this gauge and I see
That me and TA can agree
That we are the best in this thread
With these rhymes in our head
We killin it dead
And we don’t tread
On old ideas
Startin careers
You ain’t got no reason to fear us
You should just come and cheer us
And you ain’t got no reason to try and clear us
Cause honestly you ain’t gettin near us
We winnin this game
And you cannot tame
We ain’t gonna be lame
Goin in for some fame
And we’re not actin the same
I’m leavin this train
Bye.
MN staets is comin up
I’m gettin ready to light it
up rock the stage like a pro
But I know I’m not a pro
But I won’t let that slow me down I’ll do my
best to rock this town shake things up rock
it hard party all day and play it hard.
At Ma States Ill throw out all my cards
All my tricks, wether easy or hard
I swear I will definitely try to blow 'em away
I just really hope I win someday…
Ima just gonna go off topic
Has anyone seen those spins of Tropic?
Their design the Capricorn is so very sleek
I really wish they hadn’t sold out in a week
Or how about that Werrd Tre
That’s a design I will certainly pay
All of these selections are so good
I think my wallet will be hollow as it never should
I got no money no more
I spent it all cuz I’m gonna
go like a pro makin movies all the time
rockin the night with my throws in
the dark yea yea I know this rap was short so I’m
makin it longeer so that it becomes stornger
lastin longer then eva before cuz
long lastin raps always get some more.
Me and Dr. Awesome team tagging,
Erik, Zort and T.A. bragging,
Talking about our rhymes,
Not to nickel and dime,
While I post up my money shots,
Love me, or you love me not,
Throw Rich Alliance, not violent,
Move with money and in silence.
Competition gets exposed,
Like no clothes…on GoPros,
All for nothing like pro bono,
Even if you’re screaming “YOLO.”
Don’t think of coming solo,
Battling me is still a no no.
I was spending rebellious,
Getting new stuff don’t be jealous,
Copping the new bip bop,
The second that it drops,
On that new Marmot 2,
I’m buying just like all of you,
Yup, that’s what I’m gonna do.
And I even wanted two.
But, I will behave,
Save the money I made,
I’m counting up the hundreds,
Competition, they don’t want it!
Oh dang TA, I just got owned
I feel like I need some talent loned
I see what you mean by those contests
The first one I entered was who could sleep the longest
I took the that the wrong way
I just went to sleep and dreamed away.
Man, I felt so stupid
That’ll never get me struck by Cupid
So that was my story, and I know it was odd…
Peace out… Man, I’m gonna go play some COD.
You playin COD I’m playin planetside
Killin them like General Zod
And if I seem out I’ll give em nod
Now I’m sittin here prayin to god
Hopin to get my place
for Ga States
So everyone can know my name
And the games I play
Finally then I’ll stay
Scorin them points
Blowin up this joint
Maken sure all tricks are on point
And gettin up to annoint
Them
And after I win
I’ll prolly be zen
Goin past ten
And then I’ll be talkin
And I’ll be rockin
Up that place
Showin what it takes
To be best
Better than the rest
Takin out that test
And I’ll prophes
As to how I progress
Past everyone
And I’m done.
You’ll be in Georgia States,
And you’ll do more than great,
When you step on stage and throw,
Maybe you can play a Flow,
By the company Spin Dynamics,
If that’s not how you planned it,
Then you can play another,
Maybe a HOT or play a Shutter.
When you get to competition,
The audience all watch and listen,
While you carry out the mission,
And the judges make decisions.
I’ll be at Mass States Contest,
I planned the trip it’s all set,
No work and all play,
Throws and perks all day.
Spending money…always,
Then, run into Andre. 
I won’t compete,
Cause my manner is discreet,
Lots of people I will meet,
but, watch the contest from my seat.
The rhym rap thread needds
a bump so here I am bumpin it
up ti\o the top till we drop
all the time when it falls back down I’ll bump it
again cuz this thread is goin for the win.
This thread needs a bump, it fell into a slump,
That will happen once, it was down in the dumps,
I bought a new car, and it’s called a Fusion,
I was driving it today, on the road I was cruisin’,
It’s a new sedan, other cars are inferior,
My car is silver, with black leather interior,
The new car is sweet, but things are done simply,
Got my heated seats, and it has keyless entry,
I’m going to buy new floor mats when I get paid,
Key to the ignition opens like a switch blade.
The car smells new and the outside is shiny,
Rolling with my crew, all my dudes right behind me,
Rolling like a motorcade showing off wheels,
Got a case of throws to play, so that is the deal.
New ride, fresh wheels, that’s how we ride,
Don’t own Glide or Pride, but throw rich til I die.
Lol hows yur car keyless entry but
yur key comes out like a switchblade lol
Keyless entry is for openning the door
and TA said it was the key to the ignition that comes out like a switch blade. now back on topic
Ford fusions are cool but there
alittle expensive but I don’t have to
worry cuz I don’t have a license
but one day when I get dat money
and I’ll buy a nice car and cruise down
the highway like a rock star yea.
Erik is correct. I can enter without the key if I want to. I still need a key to drive the car though. Not sure what about that was confusing. 
Moving on…
Erik has no license, but he’s not crying,
Cause he’s on the ranch and he’s horseback riding,
I never rode a horse, but I’m in the city,
I’m on the right course, but street thugs try to kill me,
Well, not me really, it happens in the movies,
I mind my own business so it never happened to me.
Maybe it rhymed, the only reason that I said it,
As a matter of fact, I said it…but just forget it.
Cause sometimes I say things just cause it rhymed,
And I count that money, stacking bills, nickels and dimes,
So don’t believe everything you hear in a song,
Some of it is right, and some of it is wrong,
It’s having fun with rhymes, and writing in a language,
Good way to spend time, but it’s all…entertainment. 
That was pretty sick
let me get in the mix
light my spliff
at the flick of my bic
then I learn some brand new tricks
on my CLyDUB yoyo
im still a beginner I aint no pro tho
But this rhythm rap read I mean thread
I can do it without led
And a mic
My rapper name ohh its Lil Loke
kickin it in Cen Cali blowin indo smoke
ughh
^ Not bad bro, you should keep up the flow,
Next thing you know, you’ll be out doing shows,
I used to be on stage, way back in the days,
Now I’m up there in age, so I work and get paid,
I still write rhymes, but only on occasion,
I made good songs, and a few were amazing,
But, I’m more busy now, and just explaining,
Cause I still got the skills, so I’m not complaining,
You write with the BIC I got a number 2 pencil,
I write in silence, sometimes to instrumental,
Haters try to trace me just like a stencil,
My style is crazy mental, and I smile with no dimples. ;D
Who ride nikka
pik up the swishas
and the liqua
we bout to make it mo sicka
break down the weed
I can roll em mo quicker
I only mess wit fire
forget them fakes
I dont mess wit liars
my ears so bad that
I had ta retire
but im back from the dead
Like michel f#$@in myers
And every English teacher died this day.
Dayum dats cold son.
what yu got to say brah. ???
Nevermind about a teacher,
or any other creature,
I got something to reach ya,
New hits for your speakers,
Your rap was cool,
but it broke one of the rules,
It’s not anything new,
or something learned at school,
Don’t mean to embarrass ya,
No curses turned into characters,
That is not allowed,
So I have to call a foul,
You seem to be new,
and your rhyme style is cool,
So continue on dude,
but, first read the forum rules,
Make sure to make note of it,
and keep your raps appropriate.
I suggested you take note,
From the rules I’ll paste this quote:
“Attempting to circumvent this rule using abbreviations, acronyms, or other obvious representations of unacceptable language will not be tolerated.” 
Sorry yo didnt mean to disrespect
but next time I know ima come correct