Please help a fellow yoyoer out a bit

[baerinatux]

Hey there everyone! So here is my contest entry for round 1 of the CLYW contest. I did not make it to round 2 and I am looking for feedback from all of you on how I could have improved the video. I really appreciate all the help I know I will receive from you guys!

2013 CLYW Video Contest What you don't see

Also, once this video reaches 1000 views, I have something special I will release.

[yoyojohn (J△NW△LF W△LF)]

Pretty good. You don’t need to beg.

[baerinatux]

@johnthejwolfe

Pretty good. You don’t need to beg.

I’m not trying to beg, just get feedback so I can improve

[AGyoyo]

Try doing more whips

[yoyoavenger]

@baerinatux

I’m not trying to beg, just get feedback so I can improve

I just figured out your username. Baer in a tux. Lol took me a year.

[baerinatux]

@yoyoavenger

I just figured out your username. Baer in a tux. Lol took me a year.

Hahaha sorry for confusing you! You could have asked though