Just looking for some feedback. Constructive criticism is appreciated 
In my opinion, your attempt was an (almost) complete success.
I could nitpick at little things, but overall, it was pretty smooth.
Keepi it coming! 
Ithought the same but can you delete one of these threads? Save the mods some work or at least lock it, you do not need 2
Besides a few small mistakes here and there, smoother than silk.