My attempt on smoothness

Just looking for some feedback. Constructive criticism is appreciated :slight_smile:

In my opinion, your attempt was an (almost) complete success.

I could nitpick at little things, but overall, it was pretty smooth.

Keepi it coming! :wink:

Ithought the same but can you delete one of these threads? Save the mods some work or at least lock it, you do not need 2

Besides a few small mistakes here and there, smoother than silk. :slight_smile: