Ive spent WAY too much time trying to imagine exactly WHAT this would even LOOK like 
like …I mean I SHOULD be getting my daughter ready for school BUT I can’t stop trying to picture this 
Tbh I don’t do as much reading as I’d like and used to do BUT I got a kick outta the sample chapter
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Ok NOW I can only picture it play out like the pottery scene from “Ghost” and I just imagine Benny standing behind the Bank Owner while gently cupping his hand under the bank owners to “guide” his throw 
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As good an explanation as any. Thanks for taking the time to read it Matthew.
Ha I’m honored that chapter could distract you for a few minutes. I suppose a better way to describe what I imagined would be to think of Spider-man and his webs or a cowboy and his lasso. Benny’s yo-yo string works in this scene in that manner to grab Stan’s hand to shake. Once the handshake is done the yo-yo unwinds from around Stan’s wrist and returns to Benny’s hand.
I suppose adding the word string with yo-yo would have made the description clearer.
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I’m not even joking when I say I haven’t read a single chapter of a novel in about 15 years 
so the fact I read the whole sample is a testament to how I genuinely enjoyed it 
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I think you should have written a super heavy stainless steel responsive yo-yo into that chapter…
That way the yo-yo would have wrapped around Stans hand and immediately un-wound violently and come back and smashed Stan right in the melon and clocked him out for a 10 count.
Then the story would have been much more exciting and shorter, ya think?
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Ha!
Some titanium yo-yos whacking people in the head does come into play later.
You’ll have to read the book to see if Stan’s one of the people who gets thwacked.
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