Feedback for tutorial

finally made my first tutorial!

i wanna keep making these tutorials for all of my tricks, so do you guys have any feedback for this one?

ik some of the slomo footage is choppy, ill remember to film at a higher frame rate in future

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There a lot of text on screen at times and I keep getting distracted by all of your aura

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thank you harry ill try to be less auraful

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I would say if you could some black fabric to put down so it’ll make the string easier to see. I just looked up black backdrop on amazon and that’s how I got mine. I really really love how you put in a lot of text to give a lot of advice on how to do the trick! But I think it might help to mention the parts as they come up. If I see too many steps at once it sorta confuses me a bit, but I feel like it got better on the second half of the tut.

Btw I just wanna say how extremely excited I am that you’re making tutorials now man! I can’t wait to finally learn all the crazy stuff you pull off haha

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thank you leo! good point on the pov, in the future I think ill just film the povs outside over pavement and yeah I do gotta make it more strucutred

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Yo this trick is dope! The cross arm bounce and bounce into that tower are super slick elements.

As far as tut production, I think it is def very good for tut 1. Interesting trick and that is sick and the most important thing to me. Making tuts is hard. I do agree that the visibility could be better but also like w/e lol I can see what is happening. Yellow string and dark background would help though. Lots of text also and that could be edited down or split up across more cuts maybe.

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