nice vid! if i were to offer advice, i would suggest music, but i have no idea how to do the trick, much less how to make a tut, so do what you will! 8)
I take a look some of the tricks teaches in YoyoexpertTutorials In YouTube…
But The tricks are hard, (I mean requires Ladder mount, slacks Whips, wrist mounts etc.)
I suggest that you also make some pretty cool tricks but easy to learn. (Like A Type Of trick like matrix, i mean you only need to learn like Double or nothing, Trapeze, 1/2 Mount etc.)
Like these: ↓ Even though he is Left-Handed, I understand and learn a trick maybe a minute or two.
The point of these tutorials is to teach trick for people that has passed the tricks on this site. So when a trick requires a ladder mount, the viewers are supposed to know ladder escape already.