Poems. Post em'

Yes emotions are 100% of my poems, but I don’t rage when I write. I actually gave my book to a friend. I"ll post something later.

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I’ll post my newest “poem” . I mean song. This is a demo track for my band It’s called “It Ain’t Dead” …  its about punk rock not being dead, but still alive and aggressive.

It was actually inspired by Popdada and people like him who find it so easy to say its dead cause it got more aggressive.

WARNING: EXPLICIT LYRICS

Let me know what you guys think

Half a league, half a league,
Half a league onward,
All in the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.
"Forward, the Light Brigade!
“Charge for the guns!” he said:
Into the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.

“Forward, the Light Brigade!”
Was there a man dismay’d?
Not tho’ the soldier knew
Someone had blunder’d:
Theirs not to make reply,
Theirs not to reason why,
Theirs but to do and die:
Into the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.

Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,
Cannon in front of them
Volley’d and thunder’d;
Storm’d at with shot and shell,
Boldly they rode and well,
Into the jaws of Death,
Into the mouth of Hell
Rode the six hundred.

Flash’d all their sabres bare,
Flash’d as they turn’d in air,
Sabring the gunners there,
Charging an army, while
All the world wonder’d:
Plunged in the battery-smoke
Right thro’ the line they broke;
Cossack and Russian
Reel’d from the sabre stroke
Shatter’d and sunder’d.
Then they rode back, but not
Not the six hundred.

Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,
Cannon behind them
Volley’d and thunder’d;
Storm’d at with shot and shell,
While horse and hero fell,
They that had fought so well
Came thro’ the jaws of Death
Back from the mouth of Hell,
All that was left of them,
Left of six hundred.

When can their glory fade?
O the wild charge they made!
All the world wondered.
Honor the charge they made,
Honor the Light Brigade,
Noble six hundred.

My favorite poem. Im prety sure this is were they got the idea for noble six from HALO REACH.

Roses are red,
violets are blue.

I’m good with a yo-yo,
and i hope you are too.

Best poem ever!

another one :

Rock is cool,
let’s not make it fade.

There’s one song that ruels them all,
Ace Of Spades!

I’m just gonna be the music jerk… MÖTORHEAD IS NOT ROCK!

i guess your right…It’s METAL!!

JK

No, they aren’t. They are pure Rock N Roll, so they are closer to punk than anything else

Heres a new one, I’m not finished yet

Such Pretty eyes, but I must look away
Because She’s a perfect Cliche
And never have I been so impressed
never have i been so depressed

Just smile
Just don’t stay too long
I like your style
When you sing my favorite song

Sway with the beat of the sound
Soak it all in. When nothing feels wrong
but I Can’t belive I did this
Falling in love with a girl, who never existed

And I’m not just doing this for laughs, but I count every blessing
The lost poet, has lost his quill.
Just tell me and I’ll quit guessing
And in this bottle, is my last will

i’M not centimental, but I’m perfectly essential
My fifteen Minutes of fame, Lasted longer than yesterday
You know me well, so don’t try to tell me what sells
I’m molded different, like new clay.

Look at the newest oddity, its singin to me
but I don’t like the sound, So I give the dee
like a master peice, created by a name
and I see everybody living life for the love of the game

In the night air, feel the chill
Fist locked, licence to kill
I’d die for you, can’t you see
That being someone else, is just trying to be me

There’s no place like home
Thank god, because I’m not coming back
I’ll stick to my promise, but when in rome
I’ll be skipping stones over sidewalk cracks

And its a rising sun ready to fall down once more
Two sides. One Person. Pretty fricken’ hardcore
Don’t You think, How could you not agree
Because your best smile, is a lie to me
A lie to be
A lie can’t you see

Like a drop with out a beat
I’ve won, while tasting defeat
As the only lonley, I feel I deserve to make a statement
Your still Fearless, so is that just what they meant
As a last will and testiment, this is my sentiment
I’m pretty sure this feeling will last for ever
Kind of like, the best Train Wreck meets being originally clever

Haikus are easy
But sometimes they don’t make sense
Refrigerator

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Hahahahahah OMG. That’s good

Glad to finnaly see you on the forms bro :wink:

BTW, my favorite poem. I memorized the whole thing ;D

These mishaps
make me collapse
I’ll relapse
Before I say these raps

My misforune, is torture
like I’m a sorcerer
Just because I can fall for her

I disagree, it’s put togehter from greed
built from creed
suicide belief
but never relief

I’ts the easy way out
this isn’t what death is about
It’s not his life to take
It was never his life to fake

he nods his head, and picks his chemicals
his walls aren’t Jericho
He needs to let it go
He needs tears to flow

He drops the glass
contents in the past
These feelings were never meant to last

But they did
He’s had them since he was a kid

Higher expectations
no hillusinations
He lost control
He took his toll
Heck never felt so close
He never took that dose

He never will
Never kill

He’s still a stranger in a skin
He knows what it feels like to die within
I died with him

And know I’m alive with him
born again
Death Foiled again
But it never forgets
all his hate and detest

I’ts bottled up
It’ll mess him up ….

not finished yet, but this took me about 8 minutes. It’s not terrible, but its not difficult to see what I’m talking about :stuck_out_tongue:

Dont you dare look back at me sarcastically
because Your premature death will end dramatically
Because people love to make Something out of Nothing
I didn’t steal skill. Just inspired, atleast I don’t just get lucky

I’m A role Model
To bad You never put down a bottle

I need a Tylenol because my head is splitten’
And your trying to swallow tobacco You keep spitten
I bid you a good ridence

Out of my life, Out of sight
Out of mind
Don’t Remind
Don’t Rewind
I don’t need to go back there, I’m not a one man rescue
You can’t stand me? Well in advance, God bless you
I’ll never forget who
Like The dream I drew

Broke into tears, like a gentle giant
I’ve Triumphed Defiance

I’ve been intoxicated
Its complicated
How I’m never hated
Care to debate
I’ve been lost up until this date
How long can it take

I was almost clever
But I must have been severed
When I got burnt by reality
But I took the call happily
But Actually
I acted Naturally
Like I was the one who acted dastardly
If this is still the human race, I’m the last of Thee
But still I’m living practically

I’m leaning on suspense built on Failed Harm
Face the facts its still raining blades like a hail storm

i like pie
so does this fly
so bye

They’re talking to me like I ‘m the one with words of wisdom
When I’ve been choked on liberty I’m almost done with freedom
I might as well make a speech and improvise
And hope something spoken will change peoples lives

I’m done with Joy and Misery
Cant there be an inbetween

If I’m a Drug? Then I’m on the right track
Because I am much more original than crack
And Your calling me a Hack?
Then I’ll change my name to Nasdaq
Give me a Plaque
For being the only to ever ecomplish
Being the first person to do this
Not a rhyme sayer
Nor i have impossible layers
but a Poet with a beat
While Nostalgia puts me to sleep
I keep, my feet
on the ground
While My heads in the clouds

AdHd
Could it be
I have something to blame
I ignite the mic with a flame
Because I am salt against the same
Watch the fire fly, for the love of the game
Because everything is enough vein
Kick me while I’m down? i’ll swing a chain
Well I’ll be up. It will just be more justice
What are you talkin’ about? “Just This”

I don’t mean to boast
but Coast to Coast
its a virus is a daily dose

A pure cure
That’ll lure
It’ll be yours

You’ll be the next addict
Gettin’ shots like your Semi-Automatic
But its shocking like static
Cling/ it’ll sting.
Don’t bring
every thing
I’ve ever done

Has been a gentle Heathen
I’m trying to start breathen
but the oxy keeps leaven
Faster by the beat its dissapearin’
But everything I start fearin
PanoPhobic

I’m Broken, but I’m golden
Ridges on the outside, I’m a solid Tolken
Sold and traded
Shades faded
I’ll be Suffocated before I’m Chokin’
I’m not joking
when i told you I’m not a bout dead presidents
becuase is I’m for sale. FedoraH’s an accident
My pseudonym is to give back to the unfortunate
Don’t feel pain, just share pictures of a doctorate
if I really am a drug dealer
Because I’m givin away everything that I am
a healer

When I die, I better leave a legacy behind
I told you for the last time I aint lying
Leave me on a stage and I’ll call my self undefined
I can get it of my chest, with out crying

Tears burn. I learnt
That if you want to live. Get burnt
It build good character, but it’l hurt
If its character buildin’, why is it so destructive
I didn’t want to live through this critisism constructive
I didn’t want a story. I wanted the novel. To be the hero
But I’m bleeding out. No Hope. Because my Blood type’s zero

I burst a vein and take a few shots and the bricks
Because if this song will be my fix
It’ll make me sick
but you need to loose a little to get a little
But my life story has been an impossible riddle
Because I’ve been living in Bleed Mode
and The answer is a cheat code
To bad I play fair
But the game is a cheat itself
the only way to win is to cheat it out of hell
…… NOT DONE YET

Im not good at rhyme
Rhyme rhymes with thyme

I like to yoyo
Im not good at water polo

Im on a computer
Umm…

i have a lot of orange string
but making it isnt my thing

Buddy Jim used to make string
He was the king

But then tiredness over threw his government
He was very observent

So he quit
For a bit

Hes still off the job
I wish I had a cat named bob

My cats name is zoey
she is very fat
I have another cat
His name is wiley.
He is skinny.

My poem is failing
I need to start bailing (my canoe)

          THE END  

PLEASSE GIVE ME FEEDBACK! AAAH your allowed to tell me it sucked, I would appreciate that, because I think all critisism is constructive,

I cry’d for the game
But my brain,
did’t feel the pain
As it died in vein
While it rained
it poured
out scored
I wrote a letter for
The opened doors

I know your type
All hype
Crack in your pipe
Let me shed some light
I enlightend you
to put some light in this room
But it was too soon
you were a violin
played by a player, so violent
Its dyer sin
I’m a hybrid
surviving on water and air
and you just drowned your self and didn’t care

You got burnt
By a U turn
You were twisted
left me like I never existed
Cuts on your wrist
blood on your fist
Heart full of bliss

This isn’t a gang rivalry
just singular warfare
when i’m done you’ll pray for health care
failed Hail mary is your prayer,
To bad the god you worship doesn’t care
or exist for that matter
but you took a shot in the dark and slipped on a step ladder
I could be madder
but I think it couldve been sadder

If you can throw a punch, you can take a bullet
44 calibur, Close your eyes, russian roullete
“Don’t do it”
Screw it
you blew it

My chivalry is honor
Honor is confidence
Not a coincoincidence
that so many of my words made a difference
You can play so many instruments
but you cant make a sound, at these incidents
I set precedents
Live by pure defence
As I remmeness
selfless
You walk alone defenceless
Reckless
To be continued