Need opinion: DNA Song

I want your guys’ opinion. What do you think of this music video? I was Off-Key

I think you just got owned by Sony.

I think I fixed it. try it now

Beef up the viciousness in the lyrics and play it to this?

as it stands, the lyrics sound unenthusiastic.

Dude, it’s a school project. It’s not supposed to sound professional.

It just sounds really weak…