Heres My CLYW video contest entry

What do you think of it?

are there any ways I can improve futur vids?

Here’s a bunch of minor points: 1) Don’t do more than one throw in each clip, 2) Retake any clips that have mistakes in them or edit out the mistakes, and 3) Don’t fade the music. Still, i think this is one of your better videos. Hope this helps.

Yup that helps alot thanks!