CLYW Sunset 10 month video looking for feedback!

CLYW: Avalanche 
Hi it’s me Howard, and this is my 10 month video. I am sorry for the dark part at around 1:40
This is my third video and feedback would be very appreciated. The song is slow down by xxyyxx. Try to watch on the highest quality possible on youtube, because that is when the video is the best.

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Thanks so much! Does anyone else have any suggestions?