hmm well my third video? outside again

so heres my new video and comments would be appreciated, i still want to know what i can improve on and stuff, ohh and this time im not acting like a retard, so yeah watch it this time, scince my first wasnt the best, second okay, and third… well i hope it’s the best so far, and if it goes well i will make more, but i need more comments, so yeah hope it goes well,thanks for watching