HELP! Need advice on improving this tutorial! Very cracked trick from tsukasa namba

https://youtu.be/NCUa34klilY?si=_KpAgTB9V6h4y3sn

I’m not at all consistent at the end of this trick and wanted to ask for some advice if anyone is able to understand it well and could help give some pointers! I don’t feel comfortable releasing the tutorial in the current state yk? Please share this to your friends who are cracked to get the most chance of helping me release the best tut possible haha. Thank you all for any advice you can offer!