# Trains - A Yoyo Edit

**URL:** <https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/trains-a-yoyo-edit/52589>\
**Category:** Yo-Yo Videos\
**Created:** [April 22, 2013, 4:12am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/trains-a-yoyo-edit/52589 "2013-04-22T04:12:37Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 3\
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**Author:** ![HigginzYoyoz](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/f17d59/32.png) [@HigginzYoyoz](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/HigginzYoyoz)\
**Post date:** [April 22, 2013, 4:12am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/trains-a-yoyo-edit/52589/1 "2013-04-22T04:12:37Z")

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Hello Everyone, my name is Joseph. I am the yoyo player within this edit.  
I am looking for some feedback and criticisms as to was I can improve.  
Thanks so much, here is the video: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xeNoZLza-Wc](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xeNoZLza-Wc)

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**Author:** ![GregP](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/gregp/32/1192_2.png) [@GregP](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/GregP)\
**Post date:** [April 22, 2013, 4:20am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/trains-a-yoyo-edit/52589/2 "2013-04-22T04:20:47Z")

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Pretty cool video!

I’m not in a position to offer any advice… I think you’re doing just great. If you ever feel like kicking the speed up a notch (not that I’m advocating this… slow and fluid is also great!) you might want a shorter string. But that’s about all I’ve got.

Thanks for sharing. 🙂

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**Author:** ![HigginzYoyoz](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/f17d59/32.png) [@HigginzYoyoz](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/HigginzYoyoz)\
**Post date:** [April 22, 2013, 4:25am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/trains-a-yoyo-edit/52589/3 "2013-04-22T04:25:27Z")

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Yeah thanks! Will do!