# Takes 1-14

**URL:** <https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/takes-1-14/32588>\
**Category:** Yo-Yo Tricks\
**Created:** [December 13, 2011, 6:05am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/takes-1-14/32588 "2011-12-13T06:05:59Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 4\
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**Author:** ![mrtheblackho](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/ecb155/32.png) [@mrtheblackho](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/mrtheblackho)\
**Post date:** [December 13, 2011, 6:05am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/takes-1-14/32588/1 "2011-12-13T06:05:59Z")

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These are tricks “i think” i have created, i would just like some input on them, i just want to know what some of you may think. I take constructive criticism so please say what your honest opinion is, and some helpful pointers would be nice, i have been yoyoing for about 13 months (1 year 1 month). Some of the tricks i have changed around or just completely forgot about, but mainly i would just want to know if any of the tricks look familiar or are a complete replica of someone else’s work.

Thanks!

https://www.youtube.com/embed/videoseries?list=PL731DE41F7D0871F7&wmode=transparent&rel=0&autohide=1&showinfo=1&enablejsapi=1

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**Author:** ![Slade\_Riggs](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/82dd89/32.png) [@Slade\_Riggs](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Slade_Riggs)\
**Post date:** [December 13, 2011, 6:41am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/takes-1-14/32588/2 "2011-12-13T06:41:47Z")

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In my opinion and from my knowledge you have definitly made up those, very nice and flowy. Keep it up. Very very nice, just a tad choppy here and there but definitly worth the watch.

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**Author:** ![mrtheblackho](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/ecb155/32.png) [@mrtheblackho](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/mrtheblackho)\
**Post date:** [December 13, 2011, 5:28pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/takes-1-14/32588/3 "2011-12-13T17:28:55Z")

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Thank you for your opinion it means a lot, i just need to work on smoothing some stuff out like you said some are a tad choppy, i’m glad you took your time to watch them. 🙂

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**Author:** ![Slade\_Riggs](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/82dd89/32.png) [@Slade\_Riggs](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Slade_Riggs)\
**Post date:** [December 13, 2011, 10:37pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/takes-1-14/32588/4 "2011-12-13T22:37:05Z")

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> [@mrtheblackho](#):
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> Thank you for your opinion it means a lot, i just need to work on smoothing some stuff out like you said some are a tad choppy, i’m glad you took your time to watch them. 🙂

Yeah it was a load of videos but it is worth the watch, hehe.