# Rate and review this trick, help me yoyo better!!!!! **URL:** \ **Category:** Yo-Yo Videos\ **Created:** [June 16, 2014, 5:06am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/rate-and-review-this-trick-help-me-yoyo-better/67065 "2014-06-16T05:06:20Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 11\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Y0Y0SR2PR0](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/y0y0sr2pr0/32/1137_2.png) [@Y0Y0SR2PR0](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Y0Y0SR2PR0)\ **Post date:** [June 16, 2014, 5:06am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/rate-and-review-this-trick-help-me-yoyo-better/67065/1 "2014-06-16T05:06:20Z")
[![](https://us1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/uploads/yoyoexpert1/original/4X/f/7/d/f7de01c7ccf0b50adfe6b62988caad19a439556f.jpeg "Trick construction pt2") ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r7LcRoIuNuI) Added a solid 3 seconds and has a pretty ending. What do you guys think I should add or do to make this trick a bit more cooler? ---
**Author:** ![Y0Y0SR2PR0](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/y0y0sr2pr0/32/1137_2.png) [@Y0Y0SR2PR0](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Y0Y0SR2PR0)\ **Post date:** [June 16, 2014, 5:14am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/rate-and-review-this-trick-help-me-yoyo-better/67065/2 "2014-06-16T05:14:31Z")
Previous video [![](https://us1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/uploads/yoyoexpert1/original/4X/a/7/b/a7be7277778264762ff6e232ff85a037e25b8148.jpeg "My yoyoing sucks") ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wujSGhxfCeY) ---
**Author:** ![Y0Y0SR2PR0](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/y0y0sr2pr0/32/1137_2.png) [@Y0Y0SR2PR0](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Y0Y0SR2PR0)\ **Post date:** [June 16, 2014, 3:33pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/rate-and-review-this-trick-help-me-yoyo-better/67065/3 "2014-06-16T15:33:41Z")
bump ---
**Author:** ![theguitarplayer](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/t/c4cdca/32.png) [@theguitarplayer](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/theguitarplayer)\ **Post date:** [June 16, 2014, 5:22pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/rate-and-review-this-trick-help-me-yoyo-better/67065/4 "2014-06-16T17:22:10Z")
try to keep the yoyo moving ---
**Author:** ![RyN](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/ecae2f/32.png) [@RyN](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/RyN)\ **Post date:** [June 17, 2014, 6:47am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/rate-and-review-this-trick-help-me-yoyo-better/67065/5 "2014-06-17T06:47:24Z")
I really like the ‘trick construction pt2’ vid. I dont really have any suggestions. ---
**Author:** ![onedrop\_user](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/o/e5b9ba/32.png) [@onedrop\_user](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/onedrop_user)\ **Post date:** [June 17, 2014, 8:50pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/rate-and-review-this-trick-help-me-yoyo-better/67065/6 "2014-06-17T20:50:41Z")
Yea i like the second one better and i dont really think you need to do anything more to it. Its very flowy and that ending is just straight up cool! :wink: ---
**Author:** ![stuarttw](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/4af34b/32.png) [@stuarttw](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/stuarttw)\ **Post date:** [June 17, 2014, 8:53pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/rate-and-review-this-trick-help-me-yoyo-better/67065/7 "2014-06-17T20:53:06Z")
My one problem with it is it’s slightly generic. ---
**Author:** ![Y0Y0SR2PR0](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/y0y0sr2pr0/32/1137_2.png) [@Y0Y0SR2PR0](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Y0Y0SR2PR0)\ **Post date:** [June 17, 2014, 10:29pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/rate-and-review-this-trick-help-me-yoyo-better/67065/8 "2014-06-17T22:29:39Z")
> [@stuarttw](#): > > My one problem with it is it’s slightly generic. Which part is generic exactly? ---
**Author:** ![stuarttw](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/4af34b/32.png) [@stuarttw](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/stuarttw)\ **Post date:** [June 19, 2014, 12:22pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/rate-and-review-this-trick-help-me-yoyo-better/67065/9 "2014-06-19T12:22:10Z")
> [@Y0Y0SR2PR0](#): > > Which part is generic exactly? The first half. ---
**Author:** ![hobbyman101](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/eada6e/32.png) [@hobbyman101](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/hobbyman101)\ **Post date:** [June 19, 2014, 12:44pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/rate-and-review-this-trick-help-me-yoyo-better/67065/10 "2014-06-19T12:44:37Z")
I liked the second video better. Beyond that I have no suggestions because what you are doing now is better than I am doing. Just keep up the good work. ---
**Author:** ![UsagiCat](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/usagicat/32/1482_2.png) [@UsagiCat](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/UsagiCat)\ **Post date:** [June 19, 2014, 10:41pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/rate-and-review-this-trick-help-me-yoyo-better/67065/11 "2014-06-19T22:41:56Z")
Nice stuff! Couple things I thought to point out. The first over hook whip I feel isn’t really needed. It feels somehow too “additional” to the rest of the trick like it doesn’t fit entirely. Perhaps a different sort of whip mount or transition would work better. At 6-7 ish seconds, the drop to trapeze feels a bit unsmooth or possibly not planned to me. In terms of being “generic” I would say certain parts are, others are quite original. Anything involving a rolling 1.5 tends to be seen as generic to many people unless its very different. I like that last whip into stop and go gt, that is the element I would hold onto very much so as you find yourself tweaking the combo here and there. Overall quite good and not choppy at all. I like! 🙂