# New design. Feedback? just made a revised version. **URL:** \ **Category:** Up & Coming Manufacturers\ **Created:** [September 7, 2012, 3:21am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445 "2012-09-07T03:21:34Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 20\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Modern\_yoyos](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/modern_yoyos/32/198255_2.png) [@Modern\_yoyos](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Modern_yoyos)\ **Post date:** [September 7, 2012, 3:21am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/1 "2012-09-07T03:21:34Z")
Alright heres a design I made it in a few mins so critique away.(sry but you have to download it) Just made a revised version based on comments. [Doc1.docx](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/uploads/short-url/2b4ZnbEL2Y8aWuZIcBUFWkmZaHm.docx) (85.1 KB) ---
**Author:** ![Coffelt](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/coffelt/32/1085_2.png) [@Coffelt](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Coffelt)\ **Post date:** [September 7, 2012, 3:50am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/2 "2012-09-07T03:50:06Z")
Not trying to be overly critical, I don’t get it. ---
**Author:** ![Modern\_yoyos](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/modern_yoyos/32/198255_2.png) [@Modern\_yoyos](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Modern_yoyos)\ **Post date:** [September 7, 2012, 4:27am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/3 "2012-09-07T04:27:11Z")
in what way ---
**Author:** ![Coffelt](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/coffelt/32/1085_2.png) [@Coffelt](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Coffelt)\ **Post date:** [September 7, 2012, 4:58am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/4 "2012-09-07T04:58:19Z")
Where do you intend on putting the other half? Your undercut comes back past your bearing seat. Again not trying to be to critical but cutting that cup is going to be a glorious fight for most any manufacturer. my suggestion is start simple. ---
**Author:** ![juliang22](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/juliang22/32/939_2.png) [@juliang22](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/juliang22)\ **Post date:** [September 7, 2012, 5:09am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/5 "2012-09-07T05:09:12Z")
inside of it looks nice. fix the igr up for better thumb grinds. also make the nub a little bit thinner to remove uneeded excess centerweight. the actual design part of the yoyo is pretty sketchy. try to make the undercut a LOT shorter and aa LOT more rounded. good luck! ---
**Author:** ![vegabomb](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/vegabomb/32/199_2.png) [@vegabomb](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/vegabomb)\ **Post date:** [September 7, 2012, 5:16am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/6 "2012-09-07T05:16:56Z")
With all due respect it appears you’ve designed the new battarang. 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![xXYoYo888Xx](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/xxyoyo888xx/32/851_2.png) [@xXYoYo888Xx](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/xXYoYo888Xx)\ **Post date:** [September 7, 2012, 5:18am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/7 "2012-09-07T05:18:18Z")
> [@vegabomb](#): > > With all due respect it appears you’ve designed the new battarang. 🙂 HAHAHAHA, so sig worthy! Calling it! ---
**Author:** ![juliang22](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/juliang22/32/939_2.png) [@juliang22](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/juliang22)\ **Post date:** [September 7, 2012, 5:22am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/8 "2012-09-07T05:22:21Z")
wow just looked it up batarang and i totally agree! looks nearly identical. 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![ian1](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/ian1/32/608_2.png) [@ian1](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/ian1)\ **Post date:** [September 7, 2012, 5:25am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/9 "2012-09-07T05:25:03Z")
> [@vegabomb](#): > > With all due respect it appears you’ve designed the new battarang. 🙂 Dang it! now I’m only seeing it as a battarang and not a yoyo \>.\> but you need to make the sides shorter or else it doesn’t work. other than that I like the concept 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![Modern\_yoyos](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/modern_yoyos/32/198255_2.png) [@Modern\_yoyos](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Modern_yoyos)\ **Post date:** [September 7, 2012, 4:41pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/10 "2012-09-07T16:41:12Z")
If this yoyo ever gets produced I am naming it the batarang. Thank you all for all your help also if anyone wants to comment on the new design PLEASE DO 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![Looper](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/l/c0e974/32.png) [@Looper](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Looper)\ **Post date:** [September 7, 2012, 4:59pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/11 "2012-09-07T16:59:54Z")
You better not. Batarang is a trademarked term. ---
**Author:** ![Shadowz143](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/shadowz143/32/952_2.png) [@Shadowz143](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Shadowz143)\ **Post date:** [September 7, 2012, 5:10pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/12 "2012-09-07T17:10:13Z")
That looks deadly. Not sure if it would work, the string would like get stuck… ---
**Author:** ![Coffelt](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/coffelt/32/1085_2.png) [@Coffelt](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Coffelt)\ **Post date:** [September 7, 2012, 6:01pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/13 "2012-09-07T18:01:33Z")
I know what you are going for and like I said before simplify. If i am right these would cost a bundle to machine. ---
**Author:** ![gaara4sand](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/g/b487fb/32.png) [@gaara4sand](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/gaara4sand)\ **Post date:** [September 7, 2012, 8:38pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/14 "2012-09-07T20:38:41Z")
mvp inspired? ---
**Author:** ![Modern\_yoyos](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/modern_yoyos/32/198255_2.png) [@Modern\_yoyos](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Modern_yoyos)\ **Post date:** [September 7, 2012, 9:02pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/15 "2012-09-07T21:02:12Z")
not realy mvp more of pure boredom 🙂 also good point with the copyright name but ill think of something itl probably be getting my ideas into protos in a year or so so ive got time to think of the name. ---
**Author:** ![yoyomaverick](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/yoyomaverick/32/641_2.png) [@yoyomaverick](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/yoyomaverick)\ **Post date:** [September 7, 2012, 10:39pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/16 "2012-09-07T22:39:01Z")
I’m gonna sketch and render a better version for ya just to see what it looks like. ---
**Author:** ![yoyomaverick](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/yoyomaverick/32/641_2.png) [@yoyomaverick](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/yoyomaverick)\ **Post date:** [September 7, 2012, 11:03pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/17 "2012-09-07T23:03:16Z")
Pardon the lack of quality and slight change in design… I wasnt clearly looking at the picture. But the design in the picture wouldve hurt quit badly… I basically ended up with a glacier express type of thing. ![](https://us1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/uploads/yoyoexpert1/original/4X/d/9/f/d9f9d89917b4f3484f0e60826c0bc24fa1532f61.jpeg) ![](https://us1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/uploads/yoyoexpert1/original/4X/f/8/c/f8ce78b7b0abef93385f5bfdabdd432c265a01f3.jpeg) ---
**Author:** ![yomorrow](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/y/278dde/32.png) [@yomorrow](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/yomorrow)\ **Post date:** [September 8, 2012, 12:04am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/18 "2012-09-08T00:04:36Z")
Man, that rendering looks nice! ---
**Author:** ![yoyomaverick](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/yoyomaverick/32/641_2.png) [@yoyomaverick](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/yoyomaverick)\ **Post date:** [September 8, 2012, 1:22am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/19 "2012-09-08T01:22:06Z")
I applied the wrong textures on the wrong places 😛 But thanks. ---
**Author:** ![Deeman103](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/b5e925/32.png) [@Deeman103](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Deeman103)\ **Post date:** [September 8, 2012, 1:25am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445/20 "2012-09-08T01:25:40Z")
Thats not a glcier express at all, very unique but loooks har to machine [Next page](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/new-design-feedback-just-made-a-revised-version/42445.md?page=2)