# my late submission

**URL:** <https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-late-submission/53588>\
**Category:** Yo-Yo Videos\
**Created:** [May 14, 2013, 4:53pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-late-submission/53588 "2013-05-14T16:53:42Z")\
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**Author:** ![Y0Y0SR2PR0](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/y0y0sr2pr0/32/1137_2.png) [@Y0Y0SR2PR0](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Y0Y0SR2PR0)\
**Post date:** [May 14, 2013, 4:53pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-late-submission/53588/1 "2013-05-14T16:53:42Z")

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https://www.youtube.com/embed/cWLXFFmMhbc?feature=oembed&wmode=opaque&list=UUAdKI-HT8g4Uc6-vNuLNIsg

srry for quality using my phone next vid will be better  
review and tell me what i can do to improve my skill

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**Author:** ![YoYoJordan](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/yoyojordan/32/123867_2.png) [@YoYoJordan](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/YoYoJordan)\
**Post date:** [May 16, 2013, 3:52am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-late-submission/53588/2 "2013-05-16T03:52:17Z")

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In the beginning, you went to a green triangle off the start. Green triangles have been used as something to end a trick. Try not to disrupt a combo with a green triangle and then dismount, it kills flow. Another thing is when you went from trapeze, to trapeze and bro, then double or nothing. Try to do something in between. Mounting into a mount and then dismounting just doesnt look good. At least do maybe a Bro Slack or something or else the mounts pretty much serve no purpose. Overall though, pretty good! Liked the gyroscopic index grind. Also liked the eiffel tower to green triangle to slack catches. Looked really nice.