# My First Yoyo Video - Comments appreciated!!! **URL:** \ **Category:** Yo-Yo Videos\ **Created:** [October 26, 2011, 5:02am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-yoyo-video-comments-appreciated/31025 "2011-10-26T05:02:09Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 18\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Amdroid](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/amdroid/32/476_2.png) [@Amdroid](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Amdroid)\ **Post date:** [October 26, 2011, 5:02am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-yoyo-video-comments-appreciated/31025/1 "2011-10-26T05:02:09Z")
I would really love to hear your guys’ comments on this.  Since it’s my first video, I figure I could use all of the feedback that I can get.  Thanks in advance for any input! This is my fist yoyoing video.  I hope you guys like it!  Filmed in HD, so enjoy! [![]( " - YouTube") ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TvNJlVZ6f58) ---
**Author:** ![anonyo](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/8baadc/32.png) [@anonyo](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/anonyo)\ **Post date:** [October 26, 2011, 8:01am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-yoyo-video-comments-appreciated/31025/2 "2011-10-26T08:01:35Z")
First, you got some skills with the camera. You understand setting up the shot. But, are you getting help? Some of your shots are too tight, some seem to me too wide. There seems to be a usage of pro gear and some knowledge of an NLE system, which is good. Good editing. First video? Impressive. ---
**Author:** ![Amdroid](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/amdroid/32/476_2.png) [@Amdroid](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Amdroid)\ **Post date:** [October 26, 2011, 9:23pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-yoyo-video-comments-appreciated/31025/3 "2011-10-26T21:23:59Z")
> [@Amdroid](#): > > I would really love to hear your guys’ comments on this.  Since it’s my first video, I figure I could use all of the feedback that I can get.  Thanks in advance for any input! > > This is my fist yoyoing video.  I hope you guys like it!  Filmed in HD, so enjoy! > [http://youtu.be/TvNJlVZ6f58](http://youtu.be/TvNJlVZ6f58) Thanks, I appreciate the critique.  Do you think you could tell me the times of some of the specific shots that were too tight or too wide? ---
**Author:** ![yoyospirit](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/yoyospirit/32/219875_2.png) [@yoyospirit](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/yoyospirit)\ **Post date:** [October 26, 2011, 9:26pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-yoyo-video-comments-appreciated/31025/4 "2011-10-26T21:26:34Z")
That was actually very impressive. ---
**Author:** ![anonyo](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/8baadc/32.png) [@anonyo](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/anonyo)\ **Post date:** [October 27, 2011, 1:38am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-yoyo-video-comments-appreciated/31025/5 "2011-10-27T01:38:11Z")
> [@Amdroid](#): > > > [@Amdroid](#): > > > > I would really love to hear your guys’ comments on this.  Since it’s my first video, I figure I could use all of the feedback that I can get.  Thanks in advance for any input! > > > > This is my fist yoyoing video.  I hope you guys like it!  Filmed in HD, so enjoy! > > [http://youtu.be/TvNJlVZ6f58](http://youtu.be/TvNJlVZ6f58) > > Thanks, I appreciate the critique.  Do you think you could tell me the times of some of the specific shots that were too tight or too wide? I would but I’m doing a lot of other stuff right now. If I remember, I’ll try to get to it tomorrow and get really specific. Basically, people want to see the whole shot and keep the yoyo into the screen the whole time. You had a few where the yoyo went out of shot. ---
**Author:** ![Amdroid](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/amdroid/32/476_2.png) [@Amdroid](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Amdroid)\ **Post date:** [October 28, 2011, 2:47am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-yoyo-video-comments-appreciated/31025/6 "2011-10-28T02:47:22Z")
> [@Studio42](#): > > > [@Amdroid](#): > > > > > [@Amdroid](#): > > > > > > I would really love to hear your guys’ comments on this.  Since it’s my first video, I figure I could use all of the feedback that I can get.  Thanks in advance for any input! > > > > > > This is my fist yoyoing video.  I hope you guys like it!  Filmed in HD, so enjoy! > > > [http://youtu.be/TvNJlVZ6f58](http://youtu.be/TvNJlVZ6f58) > > > > Thanks, I appreciate the critique.  Do you think you could tell me the times of some of the specific shots that were too tight or too wide? > > I would but I’m doing a lot of other stuff right now. If I remember, I’ll try to get to it tomorrow and get really specific. > > Basically, people want to see the whole shot and keep the yoyo into the screen the whole time. You had a few where the yoyo went out of shot. Don’t worry about it.  That explanation helps a lot.  Thanks a lot for the tips! ---
**Author:** ![blakswift88](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/blakswift88/32/519_2.png) [@blakswift88](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/blakswift88)\ **Post date:** [October 28, 2011, 6:46am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-yoyo-video-comments-appreciated/31025/7 "2011-10-28T06:46:07Z")
That was really good. how long have you been yoyoing? ---
**Author:** ![Amdroid](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/amdroid/32/476_2.png) [@Amdroid](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Amdroid)\ **Post date:** [October 28, 2011, 8:47pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-yoyo-video-comments-appreciated/31025/8 "2011-10-28T20:47:47Z")
> [@blakswift88](#): > > That was really good. how long have you been yoyoing? Thanks! I am a few months short of two years now. By the way, This video was primarily created for a non-yoyoer audience, so I tried to do some less technical, and more interesting tricks. ---
**Author:** ![Darxun](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/darxun/32/957_2.png) [@Darxun](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Darxun)\ **Post date:** [October 28, 2011, 10:35pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-yoyo-video-comments-appreciated/31025/9 "2011-10-28T22:35:57Z")
Nice vid 8) ---
**Author:** ![BrodiemanAXT](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/b/ad7895/32.png) [@BrodiemanAXT](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/BrodiemanAXT)\ **Post date:** [October 29, 2011, 5:56am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-yoyo-video-comments-appreciated/31025/10 "2011-10-29T05:56:12Z")
you’re definitely good! the video quality is also pretty impressive! Keep it up! ---
**Author:** ![blakswift88](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/blakswift88/32/519_2.png) [@blakswift88](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/blakswift88)\ **Post date:** [October 30, 2011, 6:07am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-yoyo-video-comments-appreciated/31025/11 "2011-10-30T06:07:38Z")
> [@Amdroid](#): > > > [@blakswift88](#): > > > > That was really good. how long have you been yoyoing? > > Thanks! I am a few months short of two years now. > > By the way, > This video was primarily created for a non-yoyoer audience, so I tried to do some less technical, and more interesting tricks. Less technical? I’m also a few months short of two years and i’m yet to handle horizontals…even the easy ones. Thats some good stuff. ---
**Author:** ![pickle24](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/pickle24/32/483_2.png) [@pickle24](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/pickle24)\ **Post date:** [October 30, 2011, 1:07pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-yoyo-video-comments-appreciated/31025/12 "2011-10-30T13:07:58Z")
Good yoyoing, good editing. If Dr. Yoyo notices this I can see it going into after the jump. ---
**Author:** ![blakswift88](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/blakswift88/32/519_2.png) [@blakswift88](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/blakswift88)\ **Post date:** [October 30, 2011, 4:15pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-yoyo-video-comments-appreciated/31025/13 "2011-10-30T16:15:26Z")
> [@M²](#): > > Good yoyoing, good editing. If Dr. Yoyo notices this I can see it going into after the jump. From [Yoyoskills.com](http://Yoyoskills.com), in every ‘After the Jump’ post he says,‘‘The BEST way to get me to notice your video is to post it on [My.YoYoSkills.com](http://My.YoYoSkills.com)’’ so…yea… ---
**Author:** ![I6ify](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/i6ify/32/531_2.png) [@I6ify](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/I6ify)\ **Post date:** [October 31, 2011, 2:01am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-yoyo-video-comments-appreciated/31025/14 "2011-10-31T02:01:21Z")
> [@BrodiemanAXT](#): > > you’re definitely good! the video quality is also pretty impressive! Keep it up! That was freaking awesome! I really hope you’ll make more of these! ---
**Author:** ![Amdroid](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/amdroid/32/476_2.png) [@Amdroid](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Amdroid)\ **Post date:** [November 2, 2011, 5:07pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-yoyo-video-comments-appreciated/31025/15 "2011-11-02T17:07:42Z")
Thank you so much for your comments! Your encouragement means a lot! ---
**Author:** ![Maguffin](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/e9c0ed/32.png) [@Maguffin](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Maguffin)\ **Post date:** [November 16, 2011, 5:58pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-yoyo-video-comments-appreciated/31025/16 "2011-11-16T17:58:42Z")
I just stumbled across your video. Nice Job! And it’s good to see another yoyoer in Utah County. ---
**Author:** ![Amdroid](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/amdroid/32/476_2.png) [@Amdroid](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Amdroid)\ **Post date:** [November 16, 2011, 11:31pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-yoyo-video-comments-appreciated/31025/17 "2011-11-16T23:31:28Z")
> [@Maguffin](#): > > I just stumbled across your video. Nice Job! > > And it’s good to see another yoyoer in Utah County. You are from Utah County too? That’s awesome! ---
**Author:** ![DByoyoer](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/dbyoyoer/32/852_2.png) [@DByoyoer](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/DByoyoer)\ **Post date:** [November 16, 2011, 11:48pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-yoyo-video-comments-appreciated/31025/18 "2011-11-16T23:48:15Z")
Really good man can’t wait for more videos. 🙂