# My first video **URL:** \ **Category:** Yo-Yo Videos\ **Created:** [January 21, 2014, 12:10am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-video/63170 "2014-01-21T00:10:15Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 7\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![hammy98](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/278dde/32.png) [@hammy98](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/hammy98)\ **Post date:** [January 21, 2014, 12:10am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-video/63170/1 "2014-01-21T00:10:15Z")
Hello everyone! i made a video of me yo-yoing, and would like some feedback. I already can tell, i should wear darker clothing next time, and smooth my tricks out, but i would love some advice. here is the link: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BbsbzhZvflY](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BbsbzhZvflY) ---
**Author:** ![Zorro](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/zorro/32/206266_2.png) [@Zorro](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Zorro)\ **Post date:** [January 21, 2014, 12:18am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-video/63170/2 "2014-01-21T00:18:32Z")
Not bad for your first video. One thing I would point out is that you should cut all mistakes from the video. Darker clothing and smoother tricks are definitely something that I would say but you have figured that one out. I also would like to say that your background looks great. It brings back memories of when I lived in Florida. ---
**Author:** ![Erik\_kerber](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/erik_kerber/32/7939_2.png) [@Erik\_kerber](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Erik_kerber)\ **Post date:** [January 21, 2014, 12:23am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-video/63170/3 "2014-01-21T00:23:11Z")
Not bad for your first vid the only thing I can think of right now is that when your editing to try and make your tricks go with the music a little more but not bad for your first time ---
**Author:** ![hammy98](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/278dde/32.png) [@hammy98](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/hammy98)\ **Post date:** [January 21, 2014, 12:28am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-video/63170/4 "2014-01-21T00:28:37Z")
Thank you for the advice so far. I am going to try my hand at making a few more videos eventually, and I will definitely take your advice, and make sure I smooth out my tricks, and make sure the music matches the video better. ---
**Author:** ![Darkscism](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/darkscism/32/1443_2.png) [@Darkscism](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Darkscism)\ **Post date:** [January 22, 2014, 10:51pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-video/63170/5 "2014-01-22T22:51:04Z")
Only thing I would say it quality over quantity. Its better to have a very smooth, perfect 50 second video than a rougher, not as complex 2 minute video. The tricks you did have seemed pretty good, but it was a little difficult to watch when you had mistakes and missed strings, that sort of thing. I would like to see what you can do when you do another one. ---
**Author:** ![hammy98](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/278dde/32.png) [@hammy98](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/hammy98)\ **Post date:** [January 22, 2014, 11:40pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-video/63170/6 "2014-01-22T23:40:37Z")
> [@Darkscism](#): > > Only thing I would say it quality over quantity. Its better to have a very smooth, perfect 50 second video than a rougher, not as complex 2 minute video. The tricks you did have seemed pretty good, but it was a little difficult to watch when you had mistakes and missed strings, that sort of thing. I would like to see what you can do when you do another one. That is the plan, and the process of this one was a bit rushed. I do plan to make another sometime soon, and will go for quality more importantly. ---
**Author:** ![stuarttw](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/4af34b/32.png) [@stuarttw](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/stuarttw)\ **Post date:** [January 23, 2014, 4:37pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-video/63170/7 "2014-01-23T16:37:38Z")
Here’s a lttle advice, NEVER, unless it’s an unedited video, should you have more than one throw in a clip. It looks like your trying to be original, however, which is great.