# My first Vid

**URL:** https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-vid/25801
**Category:** Yo-Yo Videos
**Created:** [April 23, 2011, 2:27pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-vid/25801 "2011-04-23T14:27:25Z")
**Posts on this page:** 4
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### Author: ![Treyos](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/t/f19dbf/32.png) [@Treyos](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Treyos)
#### Post date: [April 23, 2011, 2:27pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-vid/25801/1 "2011-04-23T14:27:25Z")

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[![](https://us1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/uploads/yoyoexpert1/original/4X/2/6/6/266e6f0f08e4b0a217b92643f82378bebc12e491.jpeg "Yoyofactory ONE") ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hEDWnTloqF4)

constructive criticism please&nbsp; ;D

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### Author: ![anonyo](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/8baadc/32.png) [@anonyo](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/anonyo)
#### Post date: [April 23, 2011, 5:17pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-vid/25801/2 "2011-04-23T17:17:52Z")

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Pretty awesome for the first time. I would suggest scooting the camera back some, because parts of the trick were out of the shot.

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### Author: ![Treyos](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/t/f19dbf/32.png) [@Treyos](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Treyos)
#### Post date: [April 23, 2011, 7:17pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-vid/25801/3 "2011-04-23T19:17:41Z")

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Thank you for the comment

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### Author: ![stangalang](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/edb3f5/32.png) [@stangalang](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/stangalang)
#### Post date: [April 23, 2011, 8:22pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/my-first-vid/25801/4 "2011-04-23T20:22:12Z")

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Yeah man, that was great. just push the camera back a little but besides that looked good.