# Locked Out (First Video) **URL:** \ **Category:** Yo-Yo Videos\ **Created:** [March 10, 2014, 11:50pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/locked-out-first-video/64527 "2014-03-10T23:50:15Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 15\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Seppi](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/seppi/32/1495_2.png) [@Seppi](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Seppi)\ **Post date:** [March 10, 2014, 11:50pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/locked-out-first-video/64527/1 "2014-03-10T23:50:15Z")
Watch in HD pwetty pwease :wink: Yoyo: CLYW Avalanche [![]( " - YouTube") ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sBB34m5aAis) Let me know what you think! ---
**Author:** ![jbritter3](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/jbritter3/32/1265_2.png) [@jbritter3](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/jbritter3)\ **Post date:** [March 11, 2014, 12:00am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/locked-out-first-video/64527/2 "2014-03-11T00:00:47Z")
Solid music, solid tricks, awesome style. I think you need to be further back or something though to see a bigger view of your tricks. Also maybe use a yoyo and string that stick out better or use better lighting. ---
**Author:** ![Seppi](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/seppi/32/1495_2.png) [@Seppi](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Seppi)\ **Post date:** [March 11, 2014, 12:04am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/locked-out-first-video/64527/3 "2014-03-11T00:04:14Z")
Thanks for the feedback! I was kinda going for the dark look on this one though. I agree the yoyo is hard to see being that it’s black, but the string is plenty visible in my opinion. Were I to do it again I probably would step back a foot or so. Thanks again 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![jbritter3](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/jbritter3/32/1265_2.png) [@jbritter3](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/jbritter3)\ **Post date:** [March 11, 2014, 12:10am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/locked-out-first-video/64527/4 "2014-03-11T00:10:54Z")
> [@Seppi](#): > > Thanks for the feedback! I was kinda going for the dark look on this one though. I agree the yoyo is hard to see being that it’s black, but the string is plenty visible in my opinion. > > Were I to do it again I probably would step back a foot or so. > > Thanks again 🙂 the string is alright yeah, I just want to see those tricks better cuz they were slick! If you want to do the dark thing, maybe get a blacklight and make everything glow :wink: ---
**Author:** ![Seppi](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/seppi/32/1495_2.png) [@Seppi](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Seppi)\ **Post date:** [March 11, 2014, 12:12am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/locked-out-first-video/64527/5 "2014-03-11T00:12:58Z")
Good idea! Perhaps I’ll make another video showing the tricks better without trying to be so artsy, or maybe just a trick from a few different angles if there’s one people want to see. ---
**Author:** ![JoeBadass](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/joebadass/32/338_2.png) [@JoeBadass](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/JoeBadass)\ **Post date:** [March 11, 2014, 12:13am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/locked-out-first-video/64527/6 "2014-03-11T00:13:58Z")
That scumbag spy is camping D:\< ---
**Author:** ![Seppi](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/seppi/32/1495_2.png) [@Seppi](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Seppi)\ **Post date:** [March 11, 2014, 12:16am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/locked-out-first-video/64527/7 "2014-03-11T00:16:33Z")
> [@SlimJoe](#): > > That scumbag spy is camping D:\< Hey! That scumbag spy is me! And that was a 30 point life thank you very much :wink: ---
**Author:** ![stuarttw](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/4af34b/32.png) [@stuarttw](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/stuarttw)\ **Post date:** [March 11, 2014, 1:11am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/locked-out-first-video/64527/8 "2014-03-11T01:11:22Z")
The lighting was a tad weak, but other than that, good work. ---
**Author:** ![Darkscism](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/darkscism/32/1443_2.png) [@Darkscism](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Darkscism)\ **Post date:** [March 11, 2014, 1:13am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/locked-out-first-video/64527/9 "2014-03-11T01:13:21Z")
I love TF2 almost as much as yo-yoing. Love your TF2 channel too btw. You should add me, same name on steam as here! ---
**Author:** ![Dylanrocksit](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/22d042/32.png) [@Dylanrocksit](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Dylanrocksit)\ **Post date:** [March 11, 2014, 4:28am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/locked-out-first-video/64527/10 "2014-03-11T04:28:12Z")
H ---
**Author:** ![Dylanrocksit](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/22d042/32.png) [@Dylanrocksit](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Dylanrocksit)\ **Post date:** [March 11, 2014, 4:51pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/locked-out-first-video/64527/11 "2014-03-11T16:51:33Z")
hey nice but you cant really see the yoyo so i think you should use a brighter yoyo or have brighter lighting ---
**Author:** ![hobbyman101](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/eada6e/32.png) [@hobbyman101](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/hobbyman101)\ **Post date:** [March 11, 2014, 5:16pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/locked-out-first-video/64527/12 "2014-03-11T17:16:43Z")
It looks(?) like you have some good skills. And the white string helps. BUT! You are too close to the camera and the room is too dark to see what you are doing! ---
**Author:** ![Finch](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/finch/32/904_2.png) [@Finch](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Finch)\ **Post date:** [March 13, 2014, 1:29am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/locked-out-first-video/64527/13 "2014-03-13T01:29:52Z")
the tf2 in the background was rather distracting… ---
**Author:** ![mr.nightshadow95](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/mr.nightshadow95/32/1093_2.png) [@mr.nightshadow95](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/mr.nightshadow95)\ **Post date:** [March 13, 2014, 2:04pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/locked-out-first-video/64527/14 "2014-03-13T14:04:11Z")
you removed it -.- ---
**Author:** ![Bcmaddog](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/bcmaddog/32/1170_2.png) [@Bcmaddog](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Bcmaddog)\ **Post date:** [March 13, 2014, 2:09pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/locked-out-first-video/64527/15 "2014-03-13T14:09:09Z")
> [@mr.nightshadow95](#): > > you removed it -.- He might have thought it was bad from all the comments. But no, people are helping you. In other words you can improve your next video with all these comments 🙂