# How could i improve this?

**URL:** <https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/how-could-i-improve-this/57313>\
**Category:** Yo-Yo Videos\
**Created:** [July 31, 2013, 10:45pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/how-could-i-improve-this/57313 "2013-07-31T22:45:23Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 5\
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**Author:** ![witlessone](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/w/bcef8e/32.png) [@witlessone](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/witlessone)\
**Post date:** [July 31, 2013, 10:45pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/how-could-i-improve-this/57313/1 "2013-07-31T22:45:23Z")

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[url=[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=58p7Y4o0UfQ](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=58p7Y4o0UfQ) [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=58p7Y4o0UfQ[/url]](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=58p7Y4o0UfQ%5B/url%5D)

What would make this/any video i make in the future better?

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**Author:** ![yoyobrandon](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/yoyobrandon/32/1407_2.png) [@yoyobrandon](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/yoyobrandon)\
**Post date:** [August 1, 2013, 12:55am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/how-could-i-improve-this/57313/2 "2013-08-01T00:55:27Z")

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Oohhh man, that was awesome. How long have you been throwing? Some sweet tricks and editing, not to mention the great song choice.

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**Author:** ![witlessone](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/w/bcef8e/32.png) [@witlessone](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/witlessone)\
**Post date:** [August 1, 2013, 1:33am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/how-could-i-improve-this/57313/3 "2013-08-01T01:33:29Z")

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I have been throwing for over 2 years. I’m glad you like the video! Did you see any way i could improve on the tricks or editing?

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**Author:** ![Doey](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/5f9b8f/32.png) [@Doey](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Doey)\
**Post date:** [August 1, 2013, 1:53am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/how-could-i-improve-this/57313/4 "2013-08-01T01:53:54Z")

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Great song choice, awesome tricks, nice use of slo-mo. There are some things you could do that would make the video even better. It would be nice to see you throw from different angles instead of just one. Filming in different locations would be awesome too. However, if this video isn’t something big and you just want it to showcase some skills this video is perfect for that.

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**Author:** ![witlessone](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/w/bcef8e/32.png) [@witlessone](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/witlessone)\
**Post date:** [August 2, 2013, 2:12am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/how-could-i-improve-this/57313/5 "2013-08-02T02:12:05Z")

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Thanks! i’ll remember that for my next video.