# give me some constructive critiscm on my video!!!!!!!!! **URL:** \ **Category:** Yo-Yo Videos\ **Created:** [August 20, 2009, 7:13pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/give-me-some-constructive-critiscm-on-my-video/5640 "2009-08-20T19:13:47Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 16\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![jdog95](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/j/e5b9ba/32.png) [@jdog95](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/jdog95)\ **Post date:** [August 20, 2009, 7:13pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/give-me-some-constructive-critiscm-on-my-video/5640/1 "2009-08-20T19:13:47Z")
[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=It\_2n8\_pry4](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=It_2n8_pry4)    enjoy watch and comment!!! ---
**Author:** ![andrewyoyo](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/54ee81/32.png) [@andrewyoyo](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/andrewyoyo)\ **Post date:** [August 20, 2009, 7:45pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/give-me-some-constructive-critiscm-on-my-video/5640/2 "2009-08-20T19:45:28Z")
awesome. can’t wait to battle!! 🙂 you are good. perfect quality too. ---
**Author:** ![jdog95](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/j/e5b9ba/32.png) [@jdog95](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/jdog95)\ **Post date:** [August 20, 2009, 7:47pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/give-me-some-constructive-critiscm-on-my-video/5640/3 "2009-08-20T19:47:33Z")
thanx im about to put up the poll so send the video to my email again cuz it is asier that way thanx ---
**Author:** ![Paolo](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/p/6f9a4e/32.png) [@Paolo](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Paolo)\ **Post date:** [August 20, 2009, 7:48pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/give-me-some-constructive-critiscm-on-my-video/5640/4 "2009-08-20T19:48:28Z")
Constructive critisisim: Make sure to have real colors sometimes. Effects are cool, but aren’t very good if overused. Other than that though, great video! ---
**Author:** ![SR1](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/sr1/32/104603_2.png) [@SR1](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/SR1)\ **Post date:** [August 20, 2009, 7:49pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/give-me-some-constructive-critiscm-on-my-video/5640/5 "2009-08-20T19:49:15Z")
Awesome video! Love the effects, you are very good! ---
**Author:** ![jdog95](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/j/e5b9ba/32.png) [@jdog95](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/jdog95)\ **Post date:** [August 20, 2009, 7:52pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/give-me-some-constructive-critiscm-on-my-video/5640/6 "2009-08-20T19:52:34Z")
thanx ---
**Author:** ![druminpython](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/druminpython/32/57_2.png) [@druminpython](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/druminpython)\ **Post date:** [August 20, 2009, 10:02pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/give-me-some-constructive-critiscm-on-my-video/5640/7 "2009-08-20T22:02:44Z")
I love the song and the white affect you could see the string real well BTW song= our truth :Lacuna coil ---
**Author:** ![yoyomaster242](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/yoyomaster242/32/64_2.png) [@yoyomaster242](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/yoyomaster242)\ **Post date:** [August 21, 2009, 5:40am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/give-me-some-constructive-critiscm-on-my-video/5640/8 "2009-08-21T05:40:08Z")
you did really well and i liked the effects ---
**Author:** ![jdog95](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/j/e5b9ba/32.png) [@jdog95](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/jdog95)\ **Post date:** [August 21, 2009, 5:54am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/give-me-some-constructive-critiscm-on-my-video/5640/9 "2009-08-21T05:54:33Z")
thanks so much guys this made me feel about myself lol but druminpython was right i went kinda overboard with the effects lol but druminpython u have to admit that it is awesome to watch lol ---
**Author:** ![Pheenix](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/pheenix/32/65_2.png) [@Pheenix](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Pheenix)\ **Post date:** [August 22, 2009, 8:37pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/give-me-some-constructive-critiscm-on-my-video/5640/10 "2009-08-22T20:37:52Z")
I don’t think the effects were awesome to watch. They were pretty much annoying. And I don’t think it’s a good idea for a battle video, as it can be a turnoff to a lot of voters. There was ONE effect that I liked, which was the white one, but still not fitting for a video battle. It might have worked if you only used the white effect and this wasn’t for a battle, but the use of effects made this video a thorn in the eye. Addment: Do you still have the clips? Use them and make a video without a single flashy effect. ---
**Author:** ![AeroSlaYa](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/85e7bf/32.png) [@AeroSlaYa](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/AeroSlaYa)\ **Post date:** [August 25, 2009, 3:21pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/give-me-some-constructive-critiscm-on-my-video/5640/11 "2009-08-25T15:21:59Z")
i agree the effects were kinda annoying and distracted a little. (it’s hard to watch a battle with all these lights flashing at you :o ) but other than that you had amzing tricks everything was smooth and at a good speed i liked the combos when the white effects started and everything after that ---
**Author:** ![jdog95](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/j/e5b9ba/32.png) [@jdog95](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/jdog95)\ **Post date:** [August 25, 2009, 4:50pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/give-me-some-constructive-critiscm-on-my-video/5640/12 "2009-08-25T16:50:13Z")
yeah thanks for the critisisim you guys r right about the effects ill try to change it 😃 😃 ---
**Author:** ![PandaJoe](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/pandajoe/32/93_2.png) [@PandaJoe](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/PandaJoe)\ **Post date:** [August 26, 2009, 12:30am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/give-me-some-constructive-critiscm-on-my-video/5640/13 "2009-08-26T00:30:18Z")
Not sure the effects were needed, but liked your flow. ---
**Author:** ![mongoriller](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/b3f665/32.png) [@mongoriller](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/mongoriller)\ **Post date:** [August 26, 2009, 12:42am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/give-me-some-constructive-critiscm-on-my-video/5640/14 "2009-08-26T00:42:06Z")
Yeah the special effects were a bit distracting, but good tricks! ---
**Author:** ![lev1](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/l/b5ac83/32.png) [@lev1](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/lev1)\ **Post date:** [August 26, 2009, 2:00am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/give-me-some-constructive-critiscm-on-my-video/5640/15 "2009-08-26T02:00:47Z")
Good job. The effects were cool, but got a little annoying. ---
**Author:** ![AeroSlaYa](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/85e7bf/32.png) [@AeroSlaYa](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/AeroSlaYa)\ **Post date:** [August 26, 2009, 11:44am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/give-me-some-constructive-critiscm-on-my-video/5640/16 "2009-08-26T11:44:02Z")
sooo when’s the battle starting