# First vid, 6 Months **URL:** \ **Category:** Yo-Yo Videos\ **Created:** [January 8, 2012, 4:51am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/first-vid-6-months/33606 "2012-01-08T04:51:23Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 8\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Mr\_Yoyoguy](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/mr_yoyoguy/32/922_2.png) [@Mr\_Yoyoguy](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Mr_Yoyoguy)\ **Post date:** [January 8, 2012, 4:51am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/first-vid-6-months/33606/1 "2012-01-08T04:51:23Z")
https://www.youtube.com/embed/Fb11pZCPlwc?feature=oembed&wmode=opaque&list=UL constructive criticism welcome ---
**Author:** ![dingo54](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/8baadc/32.png) [@dingo54](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/dingo54)\ **Post date:** [January 8, 2012, 5:04am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/first-vid-6-months/33606/2 "2012-01-08T05:04:26Z")
Nice tricks but I would use brighter string and better darker shirt to blend in since some of it was filmed from so far away. ---
**Author:** ![Mr\_Yoyoguy](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/mr_yoyoguy/32/922_2.png) [@Mr\_Yoyoguy](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Mr_Yoyoguy)\ **Post date:** [January 8, 2012, 5:07am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/first-vid-6-months/33606/3 "2012-01-08T05:07:27Z")
> [@dingo54](#): > > Nice tricks but I would use brighter string and better darker shirt to blend in since some of it was filmed from so far away. Thanks, this was kind of a rushed video and my first one. Didn’t have much time to think things through because we did this in one day. ---
**Author:** ![dingo54](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/8baadc/32.png) [@dingo54](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/dingo54)\ **Post date:** [January 8, 2012, 5:09am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/first-vid-6-months/33606/4 "2012-01-08T05:09:39Z")
> [@Mr\_Yoyoguy](#): > > > [@dingo54](#): > > > > Nice tricks but I would use brighter string and better darker shirt to blend in since some of it was filmed from so far away. > > Thanks, this was kind of a rushed video and my first one. Didn’t have much time to think things through because we did this in one day. But the desert rock background was really cool. ---
**Author:** ![Mr\_Yoyoguy](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/mr_yoyoguy/32/922_2.png) [@Mr\_Yoyoguy](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Mr_Yoyoguy)\ **Post date:** [January 8, 2012, 5:10am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/first-vid-6-months/33606/5 "2012-01-08T05:10:22Z")
Thanks, it was actually on a construction site. ---
**Author:** ![nicholi2789](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/nicholi2789/32/885_2.png) [@nicholi2789](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/nicholi2789)\ **Post date:** [January 8, 2012, 10:34am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/first-vid-6-months/33606/6 "2012-01-08T10:34:51Z")
Nice video man! Especially for just six months! Really cool location, and editing. did you do it yourself? Also, you should make the frame a little bigger, its hard to see your string sometimes. All in all a great first video!! Way better than mine was hehe. Keep em comin’! ---
**Author:** ![Mr\_Yoyoguy](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/mr_yoyoguy/32/922_2.png) [@Mr\_Yoyoguy](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Mr_Yoyoguy)\ **Post date:** [January 8, 2012, 3:16pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/first-vid-6-months/33606/7 "2012-01-08T15:16:47Z")
> [@nicholi2789](#): > > Nice video man! Especially for just six months! Really cool location, and editing. did you do it yourself? Also, you should make the frame a little bigger, its hard to see your string sometimes. All in all a great first video!! Way better than mine was hehe. Keep em comin’! I see what you mean. Thanks so much! Will work on it ---
**Author:** ![Mr\_Yoyoguy](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/mr_yoyoguy/32/922_2.png) [@Mr\_Yoyoguy](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Mr_Yoyoguy)\ **Post date:** [January 9, 2012, 10:33pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/first-vid-6-months/33606/8 "2012-01-09T22:33:30Z")
just in case someone didn’t get the chance to see it…