# A 1A Short **URL:** \ **Category:** Yo-Yo Videos\ **Created:** [August 16, 2010, 11:41pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/a-1a-short/18031 "2010-08-16T23:41:24Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 12\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Cameron364](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/7bcc69/32.png) [@Cameron364](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Cameron364)\ **Post date:** [August 16, 2010, 11:41pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/a-1a-short/18031/1 "2010-08-16T23:41:24Z")
My first video, Constructive critism and all the other good stuff welcome: [![]( " - YouTube") ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IVGRWA2sC_g) Enjoy! ---
**Author:** ![SilverMan](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/silverman/32/494_2.png) [@SilverMan](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/SilverMan)\ **Post date:** [August 17, 2010, 1:20pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/a-1a-short/18031/2 "2010-08-17T13:20:14Z")
wow your good!!! ---
**Author:** ![YoyoMango](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/yoyomango/32/580_2.png) [@YoyoMango](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/YoyoMango)\ **Post date:** [August 17, 2010, 5:27pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/a-1a-short/18031/3 "2010-08-17T17:27:16Z")
you said construcive criticism but i can’t find anything to criticize. You are amazing! ---
**Author:** ![x52](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/x/3bc359/32.png) [@x52](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/x52)\ **Post date:** [August 18, 2010, 5:54pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/a-1a-short/18031/4 "2010-08-18T17:54:35Z")
Wow! Amazing. Nice video, man your really good, wayyyyy better than I thought. I hope you make another one, I really enjoy it!!! ;D :wink: 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![Cameron364](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/7bcc69/32.png) [@Cameron364](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Cameron364)\ **Post date:** [August 18, 2010, 6:16pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/a-1a-short/18031/5 "2010-08-18T18:16:11Z")
> [@x52](#): > > Wow! Amazing. Nice video, man your really good, wayyyyy better than I thought. I hope you make another one, I really enjoy it!!! ;D :wink: 🙂 Will do, I am working on some more stuff, this was my first video and normally people make videos like 6 months etc, but this was my first so nobody kinda saw me progress, if you no what I mean ---
**Author:** ![x52](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/x/3bc359/32.png) [@x52](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/x52)\ **Post date:** [August 18, 2010, 11:00pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/a-1a-short/18031/6 "2010-08-18T23:00:42Z")
> [@Cameron364](#): > > > [@x52](#): > > > > Wow! Amazing. Nice video, man your really good, wayyyyy better than I thought. I hope you make another one, I really enjoy it!!! ;D :wink: 🙂 > > Will do, I am working on some more stuff, this was my first video and normally people make videos like 6 months etc, but this was my first so nobody kinda saw me progress, if you no what I mean Yeah, I know. ---
**Author:** ![andrewyoyo](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/54ee81/32.png) [@andrewyoyo](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/andrewyoyo)\ **Post date:** [August 19, 2010, 12:39am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/a-1a-short/18031/7 "2010-08-19T00:39:42Z")
Smooooth! Great video. I loved the flow the video gave. ---
**Author:** ![x52](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/x/3bc359/32.png) [@x52](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/x52)\ **Post date:** [August 19, 2010, 12:42am UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/a-1a-short/18031/8 "2010-08-19T00:42:24Z")
> [@202andrew](#): > > Smooooth! Great video. I loved the flow the video gave. You said it the way I wanted to. ---
**Author:** ![Yoyolunatic](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/yoyolunatic/32/482_2.png) [@Yoyolunatic](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Yoyolunatic)\ **Post date:** [August 19, 2010, 3:17pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/a-1a-short/18031/9 "2010-08-19T15:17:48Z")
Wow…just wow.I had to watch that twice to make sure i was seeing it right dude.your amazing ---
**Author:** ![yoyoaddict96](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/y/dfb087/32.png) [@yoyoaddict96](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/yoyoaddict96)\ **Post date:** [August 19, 2010, 5:13pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/a-1a-short/18031/10 "2010-08-19T17:13:09Z")
I :heart: your style. So smooth fluent and you included whips and slack and suicides and hubstacks. Just amazing… ---
**Author:** ![patrickcondon](https://sea1.discourse-cdn.com/flex015/user_avatar/forums.yoyoexpert.com/patrickcondon/32/619950_2.png) [@patrickcondon](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/patrickcondon)\ **Post date:** [August 19, 2010, 5:59pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/a-1a-short/18031/11 "2010-08-19T17:59:31Z")
Pretty freakin’ good! I want to see more. ---
**Author:** ![Cameron364](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/7bcc69/32.png) [@Cameron364](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/u/Cameron364)\ **Post date:** [August 19, 2010, 8:21pm UTC](https://forums.yoyoexpert.com/t/a-1a-short/18031/12 "2010-08-19T20:21:22Z")
Thanks for all the comments!